一、低碳與環保

構思點撥

圖片中一個小男孩，早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉，電視卻依然在播放，這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，還責備他為什么總是忘記關電視。顯然，直觀看來，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節約用電。但是，我們如果從更宏觀，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導一種低碳環保的生活方式。因此本文的內容和結構可如下：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：列舉現象，分析影響；第三段：建議措施，展望未來。

思維拓展

環保話題，例如節約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯系，從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。

佳作妙譯

如上圖生動地展示，一個小男孩正在沙發上舒適地睡覺，電視還開著。這時候媽媽走過來幫他關了電視，責怪小男孩又忘了關電視。

這種現象在我們的生活中隨處可見。很多人習慣于做什么事情都開著電視，實際上并不看。這種習慣會導致電力和能源的浪費，這會導致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護環境，實現可持續發展。根據統計數據，如果我們每天把開電視的時間減少一小時，則每個月可以減少4. 17千克的碳排放量。

作為對地球負責任的管理者，我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個細節開始。我們必須要改變為了獲得短期的快速經濟發展，犧牲長期的環境健康的做法，轉向發展綠色經濟、循環經濟以及低碳經濟。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實現社會發展與自然有序發展之間的和諧。

名師點評

① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達為 A boy is fast asleep?！皊oundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動活潑，而不是單調的主謂賓。

② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。

該句主干結構是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。

這個句型的含義是：一件事情正在發生(正在睡覺)，突然發生了另一件事(媽媽來關電視)。

“with the television on”： with 引導的伴隨結構，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可以寫成伴隨狀語A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關電視的伴隨動作，一邊關電視，一邊責怪孩子忘記關電視。

圖畫描述這句，寫得越精彩越好，這句是先入為主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點看的句子。

③ are used to doing: 習慣于做某事，使用短語表達，地道準確。

④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的標準到位。

一般而言，環保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個人評論。

歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。

二、網絡的利與弊

思路點撥

本圖中，一個女孩正在因一個問題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產生10牛的浮力？”。于是她上網求助于網友，網友的答案更是五花八門，說對說錯的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見，這幅圖反應了這樣一個現實：網絡文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設計：

第一段：描述圖畫；第二段：網絡的利+舉例，網絡的弊+舉例；第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。

思路拓展

所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學擴招的利與弊等。

高分范文

Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。

佳作妙譯

如圖所示，圖片中一個女孩正在網上問一個問題，來自于網友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時候上網提問的現象已經成為一種時尚。

這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點擊幾下鼠標，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個領域的知識。另一方面，由于因特網上有海量的信息，很難區分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會把錯誤的信息誤認為是正確的，其結果是非常具有毀滅性的。網上的一些不健康信息也可能會給人們帶來負面影響。

總之，一方面，充分利用因特網來提高效率，節約時間，這很重要。另一方面，應該采取有效的措施教育人們去排除網上不合適的甚至錯誤的數據，以免被誤導。只有這樣，網絡才能更好地為我們的生活、學習和工作服務。

名師點評

① so… that 句型：如此……以至于……。

② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。

③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型?？梢?，充分了解真題閱讀，對于提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。

④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒裝句。

倒裝句的寫法(部分倒裝)：

原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。

only放在句首，把情態動詞can和主語交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。