2000年范文

　　…This problem, if not solved immediately and properly, will further endanger the existence and development of man himself.

　　To solve the problem, I think both the government and the society should make a sustained effort. For the government, it should not only make new correlative laws but also heighten people's awareness of…. As for the broad masses of the people, they should also fully understand the importance of … and take active actions to protect….

　　In a word, if the government and the society have really realized the problem and work hard on it, there is certain to be an encouraging prospect in….(103words)

　　這個文章寫起來不難。第一段先簡單說一下問題，第二、三段從上面這103個詞里隨便抽出個80~90詞，輕松完成此文。

　　今年的大作文圖畫的審題對同學們是個考驗?？忌豢串嫞橙胙酆煹氖菑埓缶W，網被分成許多格子，每個格子里有一個人，坐在電腦前，下面標著一行漢字——網絡的“遠與近”。這行漢字提示該作文的主題是“網絡減少了人們之間的距離，還是增大了人們之間的距離”。由于圖中最突出的是格子，所以文章除了要寫網絡可以縮短人們之間的距離，更要突出網絡給人們造成的隔閡以及網絡疏遠了人們的關系、減少了人與人之間面對面的交往。有的考生誤把圖畫描述成大家在群聊QQ，又或只是從正面泛泛地談了網絡的好處，沒有談網絡的害處；再或者從網絡上的不良內容來分析網絡的危害；更有甚者脫離了網絡談交流，這些都屬于明顯偏離主題。

　　從題材上看，網絡是生活中極其常見的話題；從文章類型上看，本文屬于經典的“匹配比較型”。我在強化班講匹配比較型的范文時，講的《網絡是福還是禍》（“Is the Internet a Blessing or a Curse”） ，所用套路“Now, it is generally accepted that the Internet is very important. But when it comes to this hot topic, there has sprung up a heated discussion as to whether the Internet is blessing or the Internet is a curse.”。此套路完全適用于今年大作文，只要把blessing 和curse 具體化為延長和縮短人與人之間的距離（increase the distance between… or decrease the distance between…）即可。

　　另外，我亦在沖刺班上強調過關于“匹配比較型”文章的一個實用套路：Different people have (hold) different opinions about (on) this issue. Some people think that…Others might resolutely argue that the opposite is true. (24 words)

　　這篇文章可按提綱分成三段，第一段描寫圖畫，說很多人在被網絡分割的格子里上網。第二段點題，討論的圖畫的意義，可以采用上述套路一分為二地介紹兩類觀點；第三段談自己的觀點，最好突出網絡給人們造成的分離和隔閡。這篇文章大家這樣寫，既切題又有可操作性。